大作文构思.ppt

A brief History of World Commercial Fishing 图画作文的写作原则： 以小见大 把握象征寓意 个体想为群体 具体想为抽象 趋势： 图画作文为主 (提纲+图画) 三点提纲： 第一段图画描述 第二段意义阐释 第三段归纳结论或建议措施 审题：辩证地分析问题 Paragraph One Sentence One: 总体描述 如图所示，人物/动物/事物+动作+环境 1. As is vividly / subtly / symbolically described / depicted / portrayed / illustrated / shown / revealed in the cartoon / drawing / picture / photo,… 2. The cartoon / drawing / picture / photo vividly / subtly / symbolically described / depicted / portrayed / illustrated / shown / revealed that… 3. It is vividly / subtly / symbolically described / depicted / portrayed / illustrated / shown / revealed in the cartoon / drawing / picture / photo that… Paragraph One Sentence Two: 细节描述 挖掘细节词，串联成句 （若有难度，可省略） Paragraph One Sentence Three: 1.翻译图画的中文文字说明 The caption reads / indicates that + 文字说明 We are informed that + 文字说明 2. 或点出图画的象征寓意 The purpose of the picture is to show us due attention has to be paid to + 象征寓意 The aim of the cartoonist / painter / photographer is to show us that utmost importance / significance should be attached to + 象征寓意 2009 As is vividly depicted in the picture above, (within a stretching spider web), many people, (old and young, men and women), are using the Internet (in front of computers). Obviously, the spider web symbolizes the Internet and it is hard to say whether the Internet is making people closer to each other or making them farther away from each other(点出象征寓意）. 2010 The drawing, (which is a boiling hotpot), vividly captures a plethora of Chinese and western cultural ingredients (encompassing literature, science, philosophy, the performing arts and so on.) The illustrative line beneath the cultural “hotpot” describes it as both delicious and nutritious. 2011 As is vividly depicted in the drawing, two young tourists (on a sightseeing boat) are throwing waste into the lake, (which is unfortunately already covered with various floating rubbish like plastic containers, food wrappings, etc.) The captio