2亮出你的作文技巧.ppt

2、附加成分作解释说明 方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容 2、附加成分作解释说明 方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容 2、附加成分作解释说明 方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 　　对于学英语，同学们感到最头痛就是写书面表达。平时有些同学问到，考试时，写出的书面表达要点齐全，表达也正确，可就是不知道为什么打不上高分。是啊，为什么呢？今天，我们就这个问题，谈谈增强书面表达效果的技巧。首先来看2003年高考英语书面表达的评分标准： （第五档的内容） “亮”出你的作文 表格类作文的构建 —— Which is better? 1 周末我们会有很多作业要做. A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象. A Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore. B Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression. 3 英语培训班结束后回到家，他的妈妈感到精疲力尽。 A. His mother came back home after the English training class, feeling very tired. B. His wife came back home after the English training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 突然我想到了一个主意。 A. A good idea occurred to me. B. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 高分作文技巧 方法一: 善用高级词汇 1 We can achieve a good grade by changing the way we study. (only倒装) 2 How should we protect eyesight? It still remains a question among us.(主语从句) Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a good grade. How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us. 3.My school life is very colorful.(感叹句) How colorful my school life is! 4. Because I felt tired, I went to bed early. (分词短语) Feeling tired, I went to bed early. 5. A girl was injured in the accident. She is now in hospital. (定语从句) The girl who was injured in the accident is now in hospital. 6. She helped me a lot with my maths when we were together.(强调句) It is she who helped me a lot with my ma