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A guide to assignment # 5 The Institute of Online Education Beijing Foreign Studies University About assignment #5 Correct use of past tense Exercises on P.68 of textbook Avoid choppy sentences by combining sentences; clever use of when, because, after, before, so, as soon as to describe sth in the past P.69, 70, 71 Punctuation exercises P. 72 Comprehensive editing exercises, P.73 Go through these exercises and compare your answers with the standard ones on the e-platform Organize the general information you have got from the brainstorming and write a paragraph about a part of your life. (90-150 words, interesting or important to you) Write your title and a topic sentence. (The title should be interesting and give the main idea of your paragraph.) Write the first draft. Please pay attention to the usage of the correct verb tense to illustrate events in the past, and to the usage of time words and because to combine sentences into dependent clauses. Edit your first draft by using the Editing Checklist provided on p73 in your textbook and rewrite your paragraph. Due the word limit, concentrate on the things related to your topic and avoid too many words about unimportant details. Use the words wisely They are loyal servants of the topic sentences. You may want to study the sample on e-platform before you start writing your own. Try to write sth as interesting as possible. Please refer to the samples on the E-platform for every assignment. 位置： 我要学习-学课程-写作一首页-资源库-批判样板 An Unforgettable Lesson in My Life The death of my grandmother changed my attitude towards what was[A1]? the most important part of my life. I lived with my grandmother when memory began, and then I moved to my parents’ apartment after I was eighteen years old. I got my first job as soon as I graduated from high school. Because [A2]?I was so curious about everything outside campus, so I was busying working and making new friends whole day[A3]?, and neglected paying a visit to my grandmother gr