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书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 　 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 　Dear MS Jenkins, 　　 I’m Li Hua from English writing class. I’m writing to ask for your help. 　　 I’m applying for a part-time job in a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment（附件 ）. 　　 Thank you for your kindness! ( 102 Words) 　　 Yours, Li HUa 2016高考全国I卷作文范文鉴赏。 =》用词的地道 =》句式的高级 =》句句之间的衔接 可以使文章衔接紧凑，有“英语味”的一些关联词 (1) 正相反 (2) 在此期间 (3)后来 (4)起初，首先 (5)另外，还有 (6)因为，由于，多亏 (7)从整体上来说 (8) 以我之见 * 佳作欣赏---2016高考全国I卷作文范文 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 经典累积 我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并作出必要的改变我会很感激。 然而，并且，但是 ask for your help; apply for; make changes I know you have a very busy schedule , but I ‘d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. however--- and---; but; Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Writing 写出优质句子， 突破作文高分 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 学习目标 1. 能够鉴赏范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表达形式。 2. 通过合作讲解： 能够写出正确的简单句 能够创作出精彩高档句 3. 掌握如何评价一份作文。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011