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主要作文分析 Styles of passage 应用文 以书信、通知等为主 作文出现的问题 1、汉语式思维 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday. 2、谓语缺失 She in the classroom yesterday. 3、There be 句型出错 There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field. 4、谓语动词用法出错 He dressed in a new coat. 5、词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know. 6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. 7、分数与百分数作主语 In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys. 8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers. The book I bought it is lost. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together. 9、连词出错 Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others. My suggestion is we try for a second time. 10、形容词、副词混用 The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.? The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time. 检查 如何写好 1．句式要有变化 ① 复合句 (主语\宾语\表语\同谓语\定语\状语从句) ② 倒装句 （1 ）否定词置于句首（2）only+状语置于句首 （3）虚拟语气中if省略 ③ 强调句型 It is ……that (who)… ④固定句子结构 too…to… so…that…not …until… not only…but also… neither…nor… The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist. The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. You can see panda only in China. Only in China can you see panda. It is only in China that you can see panda. Tom likes apple, and Jack likes it too. Not only Tom but also Jack likes the apple. 2．要使用高级词汇及短语 ① 使用高等级词汇 He is a good student. excellent\extraordinary ② 使用短语 I like music. be fond of\be interested in ③ 使用谚语 As the saying goes,“” It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言） However,some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to your work. As far as I’m con