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中考英语优秀作文评析 优秀作文评析（一）——记叙文 1 【习作要求】根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上；每组英文提示所写的句数不限。  彼得只有五岁，和他的祖母住在一起。一天他的祖母得了重感冒，彼得急得直哭，后来他…… (1) Peter, five　 (2) live, grandma (3) have, cold, worried, cry (4) idea, find, parents telephone number, call 　(5) news, hurry, home, hospital 　【参考范文】 　　Peter is only five (years old). He lives with his grandma. One day his grandma had a cold. Peter was so worried that he began to cry. Then he had an idea. He found his parents telephone number and gave them a call. When his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took Peters grandma to the