李翠丽书面表达.ppt

Traveling is ______ 1. I will travel some places to relax myself. 2. I think Travel not only waste us times but also it is bed for our study. 3. But I know do the homework is good for me. 4. firstly, through go on vacation we can make more friend. 5. Second. We will can see sightligh and known world. 6. You will make much too friend. 7. However, these knowledge can’t study form textbook. 8. The summer vacation is comes our school life now. 9. Secondly, we should to read books so that to improve we Chinese knowledge. 10. Traveling can let mine rest, forget sad, forget tired. Traveling is ______ 11. There are too many places are famous very much. 12. We’ll stay there four days. 13. We can go to the cinema, watching videos and go to swimming pool. 14. What interesting traveling it is! 15. Nowadays, the most of people want to traveling. Why this is? 16. We have study hard a term. 17. Traveling is good for study grew up healthily. 18. So I very like travel. 19. Not only is able to relax body and heart but also interesting very much. 20. Finally, we took the bus go home. * * Residing-in 1. 注意书写美观、重视细节标点 书写是否美观、标点是否正确、全篇是否对齐 a-u c-e-l f-t h-k-n i-z m-vn o-U r-v t-e u-w rr-w 2. 边誊写边检查，注意是否词数合格 留心拼写、注意词性是否正确；是否词数不够 优点 (1)足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累 (2)价格通常较便宜 (3)可供选择的范围广，品种多 缺点 只看到图片，看不到商品本身 (2)容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费 在家 看完电视后，及时关掉；独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋或邀请网友来家 在学校 不要在教室里互相追逐；在运动时，注意保护自己 在路上 遵守交通规则。比如：骑车时不要听音乐；过马路时，注意红绿灯 备战中考：我能行，能 行，一定能行！ 决胜中考：我会赢，会赢，一定会赢！ 中考寄语 华宁县第四中学 李翠丽 学习目标 1.书面表达常犯错误分析 2.书面表达的方法和技巧3.实际训练 第五档:（0—1分） 白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。 第四档：（2—5分） 语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。 第三档：（6—9分） 包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 第二档：（10—12分） 基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 第一档：（13—15分） 包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。 中考作文评分标准 火眼金睛 1.That’s an useful book. 2.I felt tried after a long walk. 3.He go to school on foot every day. 4.