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Many parents of lower-grade primary school students are concerned about whether their children will get used to study, as their noon nap(午睡） habits can hardly be carried out in a classroom, affecting their afternoon performance. But the Hangzhou Danfeng Experimental Primary School?in East China‘s Zhejiang province?has reassured(使…安心) parents as it prepares 12 sleeping rooms for each first and second-grade class, as well as pillows and blankets for each student, the Qianjiang Evening News reports. Problems reflected: 画蛇添足加标题，如 “getting rid of dirt or not?” 文章没理解，写的摘要偏离主题。 文章结构没把握好，主题句或要点没找准。 不知道如何筛选重点，去细节。 照搬原句，没有用自己的话转述。 没必要分段。 妄加自己的观点或评论。 文体和原文不符。如有的同学以拟人手法写。 字数过多。 句子独立，无关联词衔接。 转述的句子结构和语言错误多。 Problems reflected: 画蛇添足加标题，如 “getting rid of dirt or not?” 文章没理解，写的摘要偏离主题。 文章结构没把握好，主题句或要点没找准。 不知道如何筛选重点，去细节。 照搬原句，没有用自己的话转述。 没必要分段。 妄加自己的观点或评论。 文体和原文不符。如有的同学以拟人手法写。 字数过多。 句子独立，无关联词衔接。 转述的句子结构和语言错误多。 How to write a good summary? Read for the structure结构 and genre genre: expository writing 说明文（一般结构：总述＋分说） How many parts can this passage divided into? In what order is the passage written? Which word is repeatedly mentioned? 2. Read for topic sentences or key words. People?have?mixed?opinions?towards?dirt?on?our?skin.?For?a?long?time?in?history,?people?of? some?European?countries,?such?as?France, ?believed?that?dirt?protected?people?from?getting?ill.??However,?people?began?to?change?their? attitudes?to?dirt?about?200?years?ago.?People? have?been?told?that?washing?dirt?off?our?body? can?keep?us?healthy.?However,?some?scientists?believe?that?exposure?to?some?dirt?may?help?our?immune?system.? （考试说明概要写作范文） （考试说明概要写作范文） My version: People’s attitudes towards dirt on the skin vary over time. In the early 16th century, Europeans thought that dirt defended their bodies against illnesses. However,?people came to believe washing off dirt benefited health, but over time they have become too particular about cleanliness. ?Yet nowadays some scientists believe kids sho