交换,学习计划.doc

交换,学习计划 篇一：学习计划批改-赴韩国交换_托福写作 智课网TOEFL备考资料 学习计划批改:赴韩国交换_托福写作 申请赴韩国交换，学习计划批改。总的来说，TPO小站认为这篇学习计划写得太过笼统，之前的相关领域的一些成就，体会，和为什么转专业做交换学习都没有完全交代清楚，不够细化具体。 学习该专业的理由，未来的计划以及所做的准备工作，建议参考这个思路来重新组织文章结构。 原文： Introduction of my background I#39;m XXX, female, a sophomore studying in XXX. During the past 2 years, I was fascinated in the knowledge I have learned. I got a competitive GPA 4.14(equivalent to 3.44/4.0 ) and won a second scholarship (top 15%). I won the first prize of debate competition and diplomatic negotiation competition in our university for many times. The more had I experienced, the stronger willing of getting challenges and broaden my horizon raised. So I seize the opportunity of this international exchange program for the coming fall semester. Why CAU First, CAU located in Korea, a fascinating country. Korea is a center of economic activity, culture, and arts, owing an excellent industrial system, those industrial products influence our life, for instance, everyone in my family use mobile phone produced in Korea. Recently Korean dramas, movies, and music are attracting many audiences all around the world, watching Korean drama with my friends in leisure time is one of my hobbies. Thus, I#39;d love to study and live in Korea for a period of time. Second, CAU is a attracted university with long history, high reputation and high quality of education. Ranked 6th among universities in Korea, CAU is the first-choice university by Korean students, it is the best choice for me as well. I am dreaming to become a contributing member of society and believing that I can get closer to righteousness and truth with the help of CAU. Why do I choose to study business administration I have been interested in business for a long time, though I#39;m major in law. Last summer, I got an internship in AIA Group Limited (Hong Kong) through a summer program, developed my interest in business administration. After came back to my home university, I choose several cou