2015中考复习课件写作指导.pptVIP

Better Your Writing Better? How? Fuqiao Middle School Wang Jingyu Lead-in Pre-writing What/How about… Let’s … We should… We shouldn’t… Give advice in different ways What can we do to solve the problem? It’s better for us to… We’d better… Don’t forget to… Don’t… 学校提倡环保运动。假如你是Amy，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿 内容包含： 1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.离开教室前应关灯； 3.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：1.词数：90词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名.参考词汇:cloth bag ;plastic bag Hello, everyone. I’m Amy. Thank you for your listening! While-writing While-writing 话题 篇章构成 （共____段）1.________ 2.________________ 3.______... 体裁 ___(A.演讲稿B.书信C. 调查报告) 人称 时态 字数 Examine the topic.（审题） 3 Beginning Main body Ending A First Person(第一人称) 90 Simple present tense(一般现在时) Protecting the environment Outline sample Topic Beginning: Main Body: topic sentence: （主题句） suggestion 1: suggestion 2: Ending : Tip1: Writing an outline helps to organize your ideas better. suggestion 3: It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. do something to use cloth bags turn off the lights walk or ride a bike to school hope Sample1 Hello, everyone. I’m Amy. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. We can use cloth bags. We can’t use plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms. We should save energy. We can walk or ride a bike to school. It will be better. We should try our best to reduce pollution. We should reduce waste. Even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live . Thank you for your listening! 句型应避免重复 While-writing 1.We can use cloth bags . We can’t use plastic bags when we go shopping. 2 We should turn off the lights before