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专题限时集训(一)　读后续写训练1A (2016·绍阅读下面短文根据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事。llen asleep in the car，so my husband went and checked in while I stayed with the kids.When he returned with the room keys，we woke up our children and took them out of the car，through the hotel，up the elevators and into our guest room.We kept the room dark，leaving only the entry light on，and quickly put the kids into bed hoping theyd drift back to sleep. My husband went to put our waters in the mini-fridge only to notice some beers.“Thats strange”，he said and I agreed，but having discovered left-behind drinks in hotel fridges in the past I didnt think much about it.I figured the housekeepers had forgotten to check it.In the meantime，my husband ran to the store and I went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.As I washed my face I looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.I felt my heart begin to pound.We were in someone elses room! Now panicked，I checked the closet.Nothing.I then went to the dresser drawers.Nothing.My eyes scanned the door rooms floor and there it was：A black bag that looked like one of ours.But it wasnt!！This is not good！”umping on the beds as I was trying to put all of our things back into our oversized suitcase．Just while we were packing our things注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1： Paragraph 2： 【写作指导】读后续写的前提是将所给材料读透弄清故事前半部分叙述的内容。根据所给材料可知作者一家人旅途中去宾馆住宿但却发现服务员把他们带进了别人a young man”是登记入住这个房间的人；根据续写部分第二段中的“but luckily the waitress”可知服务员恰当地处理了这件事。因此续写部分要抓住两个关键点：年轻人回到自己的房间却发现里面有陌生人他们会面的场景会是怎样的？服务员又是怎样处理这件事的？因此学生在构思时应将重点放在怎样让故事衔接得更自然、更流畅。其次应注意续写时要使用5个以上原文中的画线词语。【参考范文】The door opened and in came a young man.After seeing us packing our things i