[四级漫画作文.ppt

CET4概述 1. 审题（1-2mins) 2. 构思提纲 (3-5mins，确定主题) 3. 写文章 (20mins) 4. 修改检查 (5mins) Steps Pre-writing :仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题 Para.1: describe the picture 简要描述漫画（who, what, when,where… ）开门见山 TIPS: 1.写作的directions 部分虽然给出了大致的 主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫 画内容直接议论！！！ TIPS: 2. 漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生 有！！！ Para2：全文的核心段 give your opinion about the phenomenon conveyed in the picture and interpret its meaning/message? ? 揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。 TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。 Para3.：give your conclusion. (a) 提出建议，重申观点 主题句 (b) 对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。 TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合 如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。 与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。 转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向 实例运用+分析 实例一 看图作文的解题思路应用 1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）： 漫画信息 “focus on the topic about making a life plan and explain why it is important for young people to do” 2. 作文提纲 （结构） 第一段：简要描写图画内容（who, what, when, where…）: 爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（where you have been）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(will see where you are going)。 The picture depicts a young man sitting in front of a computer and typing something with his grandfather standing behind. The caption below says, “When you write your autobiography in old age, you’ll see where you have been, but when you write your autobiography at a young age, you’ll see where you’re going.” It reveals profoundly that young people should shape their own future and make their own life plans, which is cosistent with what I advocate 第二段：解释图画深刻含义 （揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。 第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。 To sum up, it is quite essential for young people especially the university students to make life plan early so as to face the challegings confidently after graduations. What we should do is to take actions immediately ,including choosing core coures and interest-based minor courses and figuring out exact schedules for study or future career. Only in this way, can our university time is rewarding in the long run. 实例二2013.06 真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your