英语论文写作4英语论文写作4.doc

Unit 8 1) using non-finites; 2) using replacement of attributes; 3) using adverbs; 4) using nouns; 5) using adjectives; 6) using prepositional phrases; 7) using elliptical forms; 8) using technical terms; 9) using contracted words; and 10) deleting redundant expressions. Let’s deal with them one by one with comparative examples. 1) Using Non-finites A full sentence: In addition to bank loan in the Eurodollar market, Bell South can consider that the company uses a domestic loan. A concise sentence: In addition to bank loan in the Eurodollar market, Bell South can consider using a domestic loan. (gerund) A full sentence: The research that is now being carried out in the area is extensive and meaningful. A concise sentence: The research now being carried out in the area is extensive and meaningful. (participial phrase ) A full sentence: If you look carefully, you will discover even more ways to shorten the sentences without changing their meaning. A concise sentence: Looking carefully, you will discover even more ways to shorten the sentences without changing their meaning. (participial phrase) A full sentence: In our experiment, we used a number of probes. The reason for that was to eliminate the problems and errors associated with wet chemical analysis. A concise sentence: In our experiment, we used a number of probes so as to eliminate the problems and errors associated with wet chemical analysis. (infinitive phrase) A full sentence: The classification/prediction phase is responsible for determining the actions to be performed on new documents. A concise sentence: The classification/prediction phase determines how to process new documents. (infinitive phrase) 2) Using Replacement of Attributes A full sentence: The precision of the experiment was affected by the noise of the engine nearby. A concise sentence: The experimental precision was affected by the nearby engine noise. A full sentence: the transmission of the data of the network A concise sentence: the networ