高中二年级英语必修3第一课时基础写作课件.pptVIP

对于书面表达的要求： 1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆盖所有的语言要点 * 模板来自于 / * 可以使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 　　词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子： 　　 Basic Writing Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3.coherent, tight 上下文的连贯性 即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4.use the words properly 语言的得体性 5. Write your article clearly. 5. Mind the number of your sentences. To make the article tight, graceful and clear. To avoid using repetitive words or expressions. 表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。 （2）To use some transitional words 恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。 (3)To use more sentence patterns such as inverted order, emphasis, a compound sentence or a participle adverbial 适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以 变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。 一、使用较高级的词汇 1、这是件挺难的工作。 2、感谢你不辞辛苦地帮助我。 This is a difficult job. challenging/ demanding I should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me. I am awfully grateful to you for… 3. 几天前，我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。 4. 努力使我们的生活变得更好。 We try our best to make our life better.　　 Several days ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine. A couple of days ago, I came across an old friend of mine. // (…, it so happened that I ran into … ) make every effort to … spare no effort to better our life… 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2. We all think he is a great man. 3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Thanks to/ Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. We all think highly of him. A good idea occurred to me. Or: A good idea suddenly struck me. Practice1: Or: I hit on/ upon a good idea. 4. Shanghai lies in the east of China. 5. As a result, the plan was a failure. 6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. A new railway is being built in my hometown. The plan turned out to be a failure. Shanghai is situated/ located in the east of China. At the news of his death, she went pale with sorro