英语新闻上海迪士尼分析.ppt

--赵慧卿、徐丹、杨瑞 The First Snow 初雪 background Henry Wadsworth Longfellow? (February 27, 1807 – March 24, 1882) an American poet and educator works :Paul Reveres Ride,?The Song of Hiawatha, and?Evangeline. the first American to translate?Dante Alighieris?Divine Comedy one of the five?Fireside Poets. much of his work is categorized as lyric poetry. His published poetry shows great versatility, using anapestic and trochaic forms, blank verse, heroic couplets, ballads and sonnets. Much of his work is recognized for its melody-like musicality. How to translate a poem? 诗歌 文学体裁 想象`感情丰富，诗歌常直接抒情 诗句翻译应该传神：将原诗的魅力和感染力传达出来。 把握思想感情，注意意象安排，分析艺术技巧， 留心语言的变异现象，研究诗行的节奏韵律，再现原作的诗美意境。 How to translate a poem? 1、诗人写景抒情，景是诗人精心选择和安排的意象。 在译文中精心构思和重现意象。2、诗歌语言具有节奏感和音乐美。3、诗歌翻译须再现原诗的意境。 意境是指主观的情思和客观的物境，即意与境，情与景，神与形交相融合，高度统一，达到情景交融，神形兼备的境界。 译者先作为读者和欣赏者，反复研读原诗，深入体味原作的诗美意境，再运用各种艺术手段，再现这种诗美意境。 ①The first snow came. ②How beautiful it was, falling so silently all day long, all night long, on the mountains, on the meadows, on the roofs of the living, on the graves of the dead!? ③All white save the river, that marked its course by a winding black line across the landscape; ④ and the leafless trees, that against the leaden sky now revealed more fully the wonderful beauty and intricacies of their branches. ⑤What silence, too, came with the snow, and what seclusion! ⑥Every sound was muffled, every noise changed to something soft and musical. ⑦No more tramping hoofs, no more rattling wheels! ⑧Only the chiming of sleigh-bells, beating as swift and merrily as the hearts of children. Our mistakes The living The dead Landscape Leafless Intricacies Seclusion muffled 句子欧化现象，语体风格 意译与直译 generally accuracy Save Mark its course Tramping（踩踏） beating hearts correctness ③All white save the river, that marked its course by a winding black line across the landscape; Save意为：除了……之外 Mark its course 意为：标出了它的行迹、踪迹 Landscape 意为：风景画 景观（可能需要灵活处理，这里指的是雪景） 句子的拆分重组，让句子符合中文表达习惯 ④ and the leafless trees