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造句的原则 1. 完整 一个完整的英语句子通常必须具备两个基本条件：（1）表示一个完整的意思；（2）至少包括主语和谓语两个部分（祈使句除外）。如果将句子的某一部分（短语或从句完整的句子句子是表达完整意义的结构形式有独立的结构，而不依附于其他成分，除非有特别的语境2. 统一 句子的统一指的是一个句子只表示一个完整的中心思想，它不包含与此中心思想无关的部分。而且，句子的各部分之间的关系必须是清楚而又复合逻辑的。 例如：Different people have different addiction to(preferences for) books. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different meets to read the different kinds of books. From this we can also see that different people have different intentions and notions. So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life. 参考答案; Different people have different preferences for books. Different people read the different kinds of books, because different people have different intentions and notions just as they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life. 3. 连贯 句子的连贯指的是句子中各成分之间的关系明白清楚，富有条理性。句子的不连贯表现为句子结构不平行，指代模糊，时态、语态、人称和数混乱等方面。 原句：Not so many years ago in this city, one of the rivers was so polluted that there is no living fish in it. 改进：Not so many years ago in this city, one of the rivers was so polluted that there was no living fish in it. 原句：We know that violent crime is increasing, and you also know many incidents go unreported. 改进：We know that violent crime is increasing, and we also know many incidents go unreported. 原句：Both of the puppies is cute in their own ways. 改进：Both of the puppies are cute in their own ways. 4. 简洁 英语造句时，不应使用不必要的词。只要意思得到完全表达，那么所用的词应该时越少越好。 原句：In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, and some cities are being polluted. 　　改进：In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, some being polluted. 原句: She likes collecting stamps which is her hobby. 改进：Collecting stamps is her hobby. 　　原句：Gone with the wind was a good film which I enjoyed watching very much. 改进: I enjoyed watching Gone with the wind very much. 5. 多样 句子的变化性指的是同一种意义可以通过各种变化的句型来表达。一篇文章要使人觉得内容丰富，语言生动有力，就应交叉使用长句、短句、简单句、复合句、并列句、疑问句等，达到形式与内容的统一。英语短文的写作要重视句型的不同变化。使用不同的句型，可以使文章更生动、更富