湖南省高三英语 书面表达复习重点话题指导 专题05 环境保护话题指导（教师版）.docVIP

湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题05 环境保护话题指导（教师版） 【写作任务】 来自纽约的中学生Peter中国游玩时；品尝到了丰富多样且美味可口的中国菜肴。可他也发现许多小动物，包括一些世界珍稀动物，也是餐桌上的盘中之物。于是他便在博客中记述了此事，引起了世界各地中学生的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，从世界环保的角度，谈谈对此事的看法和建议。 注意：要求词数：120-150。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Just as Peter said in his blog, Chinese food is rich and tasty._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作提纲确定以后，还要根据生活常识和个人理解，细致分析，确定需要表达的信息，如：1)“回应博客内容，引出话题”时需要涉及到：中国莱肴丰富多样、美味可口；而一些小动物，甚至是世界珍稀动物都成了盘中之物；2)分析问题时，可以说明：我国政府已经采取措施进行制止，但仍有人违法捕杀这些动物来出售给各饭店。3)提出个人观点“这种行为不正确”；4)分析论证自己的观点要从环保的角度来表达：动物是人类的好朋友，帮助保持生态平衡；—旦灭绝，地球将不适合居住；5)个人的建议要科学合理，如：人人参与，拒 食这些食物，才能帮助野生动物摆脱灭绝的危险。 Just as Peter said in his blog, Chinese food is rich and tasty. When he was traveling in China. he enjoyed all kinds of dishes, all of which were very delicious .However, he also found that many small animals, even the precious and rare ones in the world, appear in the Chinese dishes. But in fact. our government has taken measures to prevent people from doing so. Its not right to eat such animals either in China or in any other country in the world. As friends of our human beings, animals help to keep the balance of nature. If we go on killing animals like this, the world will not be fit for us to live in in the future. Therefbre, all people, including travelers from all over the world should not order such dishes. Only in this way can we protect the wildlife and help the animals out of the danger of dying out. appear改为appeared，因为此处缺宾语从句的谓语动词appeared，但不能使用动词原形。 3．画龙点睛：1)第一段的第二每作为回应博客内容，提出话题的引子，最好将人称改为第二人称，更容易增加内容；的亲和力，拉近与读者的距离。如 ：While travelin in China，you can enioy all kinds of dishes , all of which were very delicious。2)文章的末段提出个人观点，段首用in my opinion作为过渡就更好了。 【参考范文】 Just as Peter said in fils blog, Chinese food is rich and tasty. While traveling in China, you can enjoy kinds of dishes, all of which are very delicious. However, you may