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中考英语作文批改 作文批改案例集（一） 【作文题】 假如你叫Mary，你的笔友林强因为学习英语遇到了困难想放弃。请你给他写封电子邮件，告诉他学习英语的重要性，帮他树立信心。90词左右。 【学生作文】 I got your email yesterday. You said you wanted to give up English. But English is the most widely used international language. You will use it when you see foreign movies or read English book. If you travel around the world, you will use English to talk with other countries people, too. The English language plays an important part in our lives. So it?s very necessary for us to learn English well. You must believe that you can do it. I wish you success. I?m looking forward to your good news. 【作文点评】 1. 存在部分语病 2. 文章逻辑混乱，请注意写作文分点阐述。讲英语的重要性时，注意“总分”的关系，分几个部分来说明，第一，在国际上广泛使用第二，在我们生活中英语的使用 3. 注意课本话题相关内容的句子背诵，以及分类： 如： 写到英语的重要性的句子有： 1. There are more than 3000 languages spoken in the world. Of all these languages, English is the most widely used. 2. English is the most widely used international language nowadays. 3. English is used in many different fields of life, such as business, tourism and technology. 等等 【范文】 I am glad to get the letter from you. It seems that you have difficulty in learning English,even worse, you want to give it up. I dont think it?s a good idea. Not only English is the most widely used international language nowadays, but also it plays an important part in our lives. Business people use English at international conference and tourists speak English when they go abroad. What?s more, English is used in a large number of movies and books. It?s clear that English is becoming more and more important. So, It?s necessary for us to learn English well. I believe you will make progress as long as you stick to working hard on it. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 【词句积累】 It seems that…似乎… even worse/whats worse甚至更糟 not only… but also 不仅…而且… play an important part in…扮演重要的角色 I dont think it’s a good idea.我认为它不是个好主意。（注意宾语从句中否定前移的现象） most widely used international language最广泛使用的国际语言 Its clear that+从句很显然… as long as 只要…(引导条件状语从句)