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母题二书面表达 【母题来源】 【母题原题】 书面表达（满分30分） “Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。 要求如下： 1.简述你对这句名言的理解； 2.用一个具体事例加以说明； 3.给出恰当的结尾。 注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。 Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better 【答案】One possible student version Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined. 考点：考查开放式作文 【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。 【考试方向】 【得分要点】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。 【母题1】【来源】2016届广东惠州市高三上学期第三次调研考试英语试卷（带解析） 书面表达 假如你是高三学生李华，期末获评年级“进步之星”。你校英语俱乐部邀请你做一个励志的英语演讲。请写一篇标题为：“Time And Tide Wait For No Man” (机不可失，时不再来)的演讲词，内容须包括: 1.你对该格言的理解感悟; 2.体现该格言含义的个人经历; 3.表达对其他同学的希望。 注意： 1. 词数100字左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 演讲稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数; 4. 参考词汇：进步之星：“Star of Progress” Dear fellow students, Its my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ That’