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Writing Techniques in CET-4（2012. 2） 四级作文的评判标准和作文范例分析 A. 评判标准 主要看三个方面：1.最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要。 实例 Sample 1. Reading Selectively or Extensively? (1999 年6月) Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法 Score: 8分 Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people. Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world. It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading. 失分原因？ Score: 14分 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. （____） Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（_____） But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（____） Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（______） 好在哪里？ Score: 11分