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How does one write an illustration paragraph? Decide on a topic sentence first, then look for the examples. List an abundance of examples, then mark the strongest ones. Then, check them to be sure they are relevant. Next, ask, Which of these examples is the most representative? Organize the examples in the way that will most help further the point. Homework Paragraph of Illustration: Topic: Sports Help Develop Good Characters Journal: Topic: People’s personality can be reflected by clothing they wear. This Week: Focus on Planning of the Paragraph Step 1: Decide your opinion on topic. Step 2: Discuss with your partner, and try to think out as many examples as possible to support the topic. Step 3: If you can list enough examples, your opinion on the topic is feasible. If not, please repeat the first two steps. This Week: Focus on Planning of the Paragraph Step 4: if it is feasible, do the following things: First, write out your topic sentence in a single sentence, underlining the opinion you will focus on. Second, please check your example list, try to eliminate the minor and irrelevant examples. Third, select those representative and interesting ones. Fourth, list the selected examples in a certain order. For example, least to most, chronological order, etc. This Week: Focus on Planning of the Paragraph Step 5: peer editing Find your partner within your group to do peer editing based on the following checklist. Please put emphasis on the quality of the examples. Give suggestions on how to improve your partner’s examples. Step 6: revise your planning process based on your partner’s advice. Step 7: hand in both the revised and the first planning process with your partner’s comments and signature this Thursday. Note: Groups 2, 4, 6 give presentations on your planning process with the help of PPT. Explain why you delete those examples and why you choose the examples. Explain the strengths of the chosen examples. Tell us in what way you want to arrange these e