what makes a boy cool.doc

英国大文豪狄更斯说过“一种健全的性格比一百种智慧都更有力量。”人的性格影响人的命运。男孩要想今后有所作为，一定要从现在开始注意对自身良好品行的塑造！性格不是与生俱来的，而是后天塑造的。因此，我觉得看一个男孩是不是很酷，就要看他是否有良好的性格。 What makes a boy cool? What makes a boy cool? The great British novelist Charles Dickens said, A sound character is more powerful than one hundred kinds of wisdom. Personality affects the fate of the people. Boy in order to make a difference in the future, we must from now begin to pay attention to the shape of their good conduct. Character is not innate, but acquired shaped. Therefore, I think to see a boy is or not cool, it is necessary to see whether he has a good personality. Firstly, cheerful, optimistic personality, it is the key have determined the boys’ grown up. Have a happy state of mind will make life better, accept the unalterable reality, optimistic people can always see the bright side of life. Secondly, the premise of self-confidence and positive character: the extraordinary life of the achievements of boys, more confidence, from the success of taking a step forward. Thirdly, modest comity character: the boys progress in life skills. You know, modesty is the standard measure of Germany operating. And then, the character of self-reliance, calm personality and rigorous and sophisticated are also important in boys’ personality, so I think that’s boy is very cool. Not because of his appearance, but his good character. 评语： 文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯，但文章行文稍欠流畅；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，此外文中一些从句的使用，为文章锦上添花，希望继续努力，再创佳绩；文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累，此外作者在单词拼写方面做得很棒1.1 What makes a boy cool? [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: cold, cool, chilly, frosty, freezing, icy 均含“冷，凉”之意。 cold: 最普通用词，强调缺乏温暖，使人不舒服。cool: 指既不太热也不太冷。chilly: 指使哆嗦的冷。frosty: 指雾气在寒冷物体的表面凝结成薄冰时的严寒结霜的温度。freezing: 指使人僵直，使东西凝固的冷。icy: 多指风暴、风雪和水等冷得使人感到如刺如割。 好评报错 2.1 The great British novelist Charles Dickens said, A sound character is more powerful than one hundred kinds of wisdom. [教师点评] [低频警示] one hundred kinds of wisdom 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母