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?How to approach the IELTS writing-----Essay two : Discussion genre 2， People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face .what are the effects on an individual and society as a whole ? 3， Some employees think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee .why is the case ? Is it a positive or a negative development ? 一，开篇思路：1，开门见山，段落低调改写＋含有本题内容的过渡句 2，开门见山，段落低调改写＋用反问句开篇，引起下文。 Topic title : 1，In recent years, the percentage of crimes committed by people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Explain the possible reasons and suggest some solutions. 1－1 It is indeed the case that all the major cities have seen an ( ) increase in the ( ),causing a series of problems including ( ) and ( ). The reasons are complex and a range of suggestions have been proposed. 1---2 Alarmingly ( adv) , the worrying trend / thorny issue regarding criminal actions is urgent. What are some of the factors involved ,and what action can be adopt to restrict the trend ? 二，主体内容：1，根据题目要求，具体分段。 2，在每段的段首直接给出该段主题句（可采用it is +adv +adj ,coupled with ,that 句型，或 同位语从句开篇，或adv＋ 主句＋ Ving 结构总括全段，也可短句。 3，但注意：该中心句内容一定要总括全段 2－1－1 There are ample / an abundance of evidences showing that the causes of crimes by adolescents (再次改写主题词) are frequently connected to poverty （切忌在该句写二个原因：比如and little education ,access to comfortable lifestyle 分散考官注意力，可在一个意群结束，加上连接词过渡之后，再提出第二，第三个原因或者再写一段关于原因的） 2－1－1’’ Undeniably ,crimes (改写主题词) is frequently connected to poverty , resulting in little education. 再写解决方案的中心句：具体思路：topic sentence +supporting evidence (1,2 3) 2－1－2 Turning to /with respect to / when mentioning solutions ,to further narrow （不定式做主语或者动名词短语做主语：further narrowing the gap between the rich and poor）the financial gap is , of course ,the basis policy . 4,中心句之后，