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1.【江西省九江市七校2016届高三第一次联考】昨天下午，五点十分，在你放学的路上（一个邮局附近的十字路口）发生了一起交通事故：一个骑着自行车并听着MP5的学生被一个开着轿车的中年男人撞了，该学生受伤了并被送到医院，其自行车被严重损坏。假如你是校刊的一名记者，请你根据以下要点就此事给校刊写一篇约100词左右的英语新闻报道。 要点如下： 1.事故发生的时间，地点； 2.事故发生的经过; 3.你的观点。 【答案】 A traffic accident A traffic accident happened at a crossroad near the post office at 5:10 yesterday afternoon. A student, who was listening to the MP5 while riding a bike ,was knocked down by a car which was driven by a mid-aged man .Luckily, the student just got slightly injured and was immediately sent to the nearest hospital .However, his bike was badly damaged. The accident reminds all of us that we shouldn’t listen to music ,use cellphones or do something distracting when we are walking or riding a bike ,what’s more ,we should always obey the traffic rules and pay more attention to our own our safety. 【亮点说明】本文在时态，和应用语言方面都比较好，用了很多加分句式，例如：A student, who was listening to the MP5 while riding a bike ,was knocked down by a car which was driven by a mid-aged man 是一个较长的句子，用了两个定语从句，被动语态等结构，是一个加分的高级句式。what’s more也是一个亮点，最后用总结的语句结束全文。 考点：考查提纲类作文 2.【甘肃省西北师范大学附属中学2015届高三下学期第五次诊断】近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们十分抱怨。 假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。 1.交通现状及影响； 2.提出改进建议； 3.希望建议被采纳。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people?s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, I?d like to put forward some pieces of advice. For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For another, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, which can decrease the traffic flow. But the most importan