ELABORATION EXAMPLES Blackboard论述实例.pptxVIP

Elaboration: Development of IDEAS 2011 Compiled and Created by Beverly Dunaway THINK ABOUT……… WHEN YOU ARE WRITING, IDEAS COME TO YOUR MIND, BUT THEY ARE JUST IDEAS UNTIL THEY ARE DEVELOPED WITH DETAILS. FOR EXAMPLE: THE IDEA OF AN UMBRELLA TO USE ON A RAINY DAY IS COOL, BUT WHEN IT IS NOT OPENED AND IT RAINS, THERE IS A PROBLEM. YOUR IDEA OF USING AN UMBRELLA IS EXTREMELY HELPFUL WHEN IT IS FULLY OPENED ON A RAINY DAY! UMBRELLA: CLOSED/OPENED WRITING: OPEN UP YOUR IDEAS Let the world read about your ideas you develop with “details”, “elaboration”, “anecdotes”, “examples”, “for instance”! Don’t be shy! WRITING CHALLENGE THINK OF FRESH IDEAS! TAKE YOUR IDEAS AND DEVELOP WITH DETAILS! BALANCE YOUR WRITING BY DEVELOPING YOUR IDEAS EQUALLY IN YOUR PAPER! STAY ON YOUR IDEA MORE THAN ONE SENTENCE! MAKE YOUR IDEA CLEAR TO THE READER! DEVELOP AND ELABORATE EACH IDEA! DON’T MAKE A LIST OF IDEAS! DEVELOP YOUR IDEAS DEVELOP YOUR WRITING PICTURES! Inventors: from idea to invention. What a development! BENJAMIN FRANKLIN: ELECTRICITY EACH PARAGRAPH HAS PEARLS! EVEN THE CLAM OPENS UP HIS SHELL TO SHOW THE DEVELOPMENT OF A PEARL! SURPRISE! A CLAM DEVELOPS A PEARL…………………. NOW LET’S READ: ElaboratED examples FOR NARRATIVE PROMPTS Examples from unedited FCAT Writes Student Anchor Papers (2010) Narrative: paper #1 Supporting ideas are offered with adequate development ELABORATION: (We take the pizza out of the oven and cut it in square pieces. The knife was so fast that I was done in a minute. We served the pizza to the students. All of a sudden, we hear the students shouting,This tastes awful! What did you guys do? All we taste is tomato sauce and dough!). Narrative: paper #2 ELABORATION: SUPPORTING DETAILS Carefully selected details are provided as support ([Drew