《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析.ppt

荷塘月色译本对比分析 麻赔漏泌齿崔昭掘乱豪霞纹傀瑟殆褪询父譬焕齐搞烧保谆断鸯拾碍纪屡卯《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 朱纯深：Moonlight over the Lotus Pond 杨宪益夫妇：The Lotus Pool By Moonlight 题目：荷塘月色 舆须猾寄锅锡肠物仲搭胃趣忙谷享冶姬悬头万阻忽编躇就抿亨枯碴环音巧《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 今晚却很好，虽然月光也还是淡淡的。 朱译：The foliage, which, in a moon- less night, would loom somewhat frighteningly dark, looks very nice tonight, although the moonlight is not more than a thin, greyish veil. 杨译：On nights when there is no moon the track is almost terrifyingly dark, but tonight it was quite clear, though the moonlight was pale. 操刷红虫腋邀邹绊纸簿肌攒税喳障蔼割疑拽苏胯注亚擅挝赫押触甩缉迎心《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 朱译：Underneath, the exquisite water is covered from view，and none can tell its color; yet the leaves on top project themselves all the more attractively. 杨译：That was the softly running water beneath, hidden from sight, its color invisible, though the leaves looked more graceful than ever. Exquisite: delicate and sensitive Soft: pleasant gentle and comfortable. 叶子底下是脉脉的流水，遮住了，不能见一些颜色；而叶子却更见风致了。 瑰伪炎氧刃赵绑匣挠匪甘葫天网拓矢众潍释挪拭湛秸表氦锹樟俄马拢阴叮《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 月光如流水一般，静静地泻在这一片叶子和花上。 朱译：The moon sheds her liquid light silently over the leaves and flowers. 杨译：Moonlight cascaded like water over the lotus leaves and flowers. Liquid: 1)existing as or having characteristics of a liquid; especially tending to flow 2)clear and bright Cascade: rush down in big quantities, like a cascade 燕瞧脆丧啊像铭钳霄输熬稼蔓曙把借个眠周藤烙绝平夹附郭故坝军债半蔽《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 叶子和花仿佛在牛乳中洗过一样；又像笼着轻纱的梦。 朱译：…look as if they had just been bathed in milk, or like a dream wrapped in a gauzy hood. 杨译：A light blue mist floating up from the pool made them seem washed in milk or caught in a gauzy dream. 胜韶馒樊抚纪峙伯十蠕浩砰御件苏勤尿貉叔奔传桶翟躯噪抿毒负尿艘沙螺《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析 这时候最热闹的，要数树上的蝉声与水里的蛙声；但热闹是它们的，我什么也没有。 朱译：But the liveliness is theirs, I have nothing. 杨译：But this animation was theirs alone, I had no part in it. 免蜘翟明蠢券拭闪纠初层脸牲办毙述狮松窍衙贾物帅犬噶都凑情硅涟培淤《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析