高三英语作文专题训练陈龙.ppt

高三英语作文专题训练 ----巧解作文中“逗号”和“句号”的使用 导学案 学习目标： 1.认知“逗号误用”现象并学习修改方法； 2. 学习使用“连句”法改进“句号过多”的现象。 学习重点： “逗号误用”的修改、“连句”的方法。 学习过程： 1. 自学《学案》—自主探究—《学习日志》—《课前报告》 2. 问题展示—合作探究—答疑解惑—巩固训练 预习任务单 1. 学习《学案》中有关“逗号误用”的内容 2.学习《学案》中有关“连句”的内容 3.完成上述两项内容的相应巩固练习 4.完成《学习日志》，提交个人疑问难题 潜心自学 （学案引领，自我体悟，合作探究） 一、“逗号误用”现象举例 中文与英文最大的区别，在于中文句子是“意合”的，而英文句子是“形合”。英语中，句子之间必须有连词连接，构成并列句或者复合句；独立的两句话不能仅靠逗号连接。如： “他赢了，我们笑了。” He won, we laughed. (F) He won, and we laughed.(T) 2.“逗号误用”修改方法 对于误用“逗号”而造成的“逗号误用”现象，可以通过四种方法修改：即 1. 逗号变句号 2.逗号变分号 3.句间加连词 4.变成非谓语动词 请试翻译 习主席应英国首相卡梅伦邀请，在一家乡村酒吧喝了啤酒，吃了炸鱼薯条。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron, they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub. 【改错】 四种改法之一 1. 变逗为句号。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron. They enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub. 之二 2. 变逗为分号。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron；they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub 之三 3. 句间加连词。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron and they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub 之四 4. 变成非谓语动词。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron to enjoy a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub 即学即用(改错---逗号误用） 1）The exam was postponed, the class was cancelled. 考试推迟了，上课取消了。 2）It rained all night, the ceiling began to leak. 雨下了一整夜，天花板开始漏水。 二、句号问题 1. 联句(sentence combing)现象举例 有时两个或者更多的句子，如果内容上关系很密切，我们可以把它们连城一个句子。通过联句的方法，使文章的意思更加连贯，结构更加紧凑，语言更加生动。掌握好的联句方法，对英语写作能力的提高有很大的帮助。 2.联句的方法 1）介词联句法 eg. He didnt write the letter himself. He asked his friend to do it. ______writing the letter himself, he asked his friend to do so. 2.联句的方法 1）介词联句法 eg. He didnt write the letter himself. He asked his friend to do it. ______writing the letter himself, he asked his friend to do so.( instead of ) eg2. Ford produces cheap cars. Ford also supplies Americans with better ones year after year. ______ producing cheaper cars, Ford also supplies Americans w