英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析4.docVIP

英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析4 下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应包含以下内容： 1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势； 2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因； 3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。 注意： 1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。 2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 Many animals are in danger of dying out. 讲 评 一、图表信息概述 审图表抓要点 题目中已经明确给我们以提示“描述野生动物种类的变化趋势”。通过柱形图四年（1980、1990、2000、2010）柱形的高度变化，我们由此得出事物发展趋势：在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降。 从柱形图中找出支撑结论的典型数据。 从1980年的野生动物种类大约有2.5百万，到2010年只剩下1.5百万这些数据的变化，我们可以计算出：平均每年大约减少了30,000。 由以上分析，我们可以得出以下要点： 1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降 2.平均每年大约减少了30,000 3.2010年只剩下1.5百万 化要点为句子（注意多重表达） (注意动词应该使用什么时态) 1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降 ①The number of animal species has sharply decreased in the past thirty years. ②A number of animal species have quickly disappeared in the past thirty years. ③The kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. 2.平均每年大约减少了30,000 ①There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year. ②About 30,000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year. ③About 30,000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year. 3.2010年只剩下1.5百万] ①Until 2010, only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left. ②There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010. ③There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals left till 2010. 描述图表信息(加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子) As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010. 二、分析原因 化要点为句子（注意多重表达） 1.①Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion. ②Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion ③In order to show off, many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur. 2.①Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit. ②Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money. ③Hum