英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析6.docVIP

英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析6 练评三 试题来源（江苏省如皋市2012-2013高三年级期中调研检测） 最近，你校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：要不要集中进行晚自习(evening self-study)。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇150字左右的英语短文（开头句已经给出，不计入总词数），客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，并说明自己赞同哪种情况并给出理由。注意要涵盖所有要点。 Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. 注意：原题和参考答案均有稍微改动。 讲 评 一、图表信息描述 审图表抓要点 通过审图表，得出提炼要点如下 1.占60%的学生认为“要晚自习”。理由：有老师管理；有同学陪伴；有良好的学习环境。 2.占25%的学生认为“不要晚自习”。理由：有时受同学影响，学习效果不好；晚上独自回家不安全。 3.占15%的学生对“要不要晚自习”持吃无所谓的态度，表示“听从学校的安排”。理由：能确保自己的学习时间。 以上是图表中的要点，但是请不要忘记文字说明中还有一个要点“要不要集中进行晚自习” （这 也是本篇的话题），这个要点不能丢掉。 化要点为句子（注意多重表达） ③60% of us think that the evening self-study is necessary. They believe that only in this way can they get a better study environment. They can turn to teachers for help in time and they feel comfortable with classmates accompanying each other. ④The majority of the students hold the view that it’s necessary for them to have the evening-self study. They can study in a good environment. They can ask teachers for help when in need and keep each other company. ⑤Sixty percent of us hold the opinion that they should have the evening-self study. They think that they can improve themselves under the guidance of our teachers. Also, they can be accompanied by their fellow. They are in a good study environment. ⑥60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. They can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom with company of their fellow classmates. ③A quarter of us don’t agree with them. In their mind, they may be affected by others, which can make them pay less attention to their study. It is dangerous for them to go home alone at night. ④A quarter of the students are opposed to having the evening-self study. They are afraid that they are sometimes affected by their classmates and can’t study well. It’s unsafe for them to go home alone in the evening. ⑤W