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英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析5 试题来源(江苏省石庄高级中学2013届高三学情调研考试) 每个同学对紧张的学习生活都有不同的减压方式。假设你对本校100名学生的减压方式进行了调查，请你根据调查结果（如下面饼图所示）写一篇150词左右的短文向某学生英语报投稿为读者进行介绍，并结合自己的实际提出你的看法和建议。可根据需要适当发挥。 讲 评 一、图表信息描述 审图表抓要点 通过审图表，提炼要点如下 1.占29%的学生以听音乐的方式来减压； 2.占28%的学生以看电视上网的方式来减压； 3.占18%的学生以睡觉的方式来减压； 4.占15%的学生以锻炼的方式来减压； 5.占10%的学生以其它方式来减压。 由此我们得出结论：100名学生中对紧张的学习生活有不同的减压方式（这也是本篇的话题）。 化要点为句子（注意多重表达）， 这是本篇表达时描述饼图的难点所在。因此我们在动笔前首先要在脑中重点收索一下有关词组不同的表达方式。然后再将要点转化为句子。 减压：relieve stress, relieve pressure 释放压力：release pressure, release stress 放松：get relaxed, make oneself relaxed, relax oneself 消除压力：get rid of the pressure 以……方式：the way to do sth. turning to sth. the method of doing sth with the aid(help) of sth. 1.占29%的学生以听音乐的方式来减压 ①29 percent of the students choose listening to music as their favorite way to relieve stress. ②29 percent of the students are better willing to listen to music to release pressure. ③29 percent of the students relax themselves by listening to music. ④29 percent of the students turn to music to get relaxed. 2.占28%的学生以看电视上网的方式来减压 ①The percentage of those who turn to TV and the Internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28. ②28 percent of the students take advantage of watching TV and surfing the Internet to release pressure. ③28 percent of the students get rid of the pressure with the aid of TV and the Internet. ④28 percent of the students get relaxed by watching TV and playing computer games on the Internet. 3.占18%的学生以睡觉的方式来减压； ①18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time. ②In order to release pressure, 18 percent of the students make great use of their spare time to sleep for more time. ③There are some students, taking up 18 of them, sleeping more time to get rid of the pressure. ④The percentage of those who get rid of the pressure by sleeping for more time reaches 18. 4.占15%的学生以锻炼的方式来减压 ①15 percent of the students like taking exercise to get relaxed. ②In order to release pressure, 15 percent of the students take exercise. ③It is a