2015届英语二轮复习写作　议论文写作之论证观点.pptVIP

第三篇　写作 第二章 基础写作 第四节　议论文 专题一　议论文写作之论证观点 论证观点无疑属于议论文的范畴，着重于说理性和逻辑性。考生在写作前要对信息点进行分析，理清信息点之间是递进，转折还是因果关系。 You are writing to tell me that you are going to open the online bank service for shopping online but I dont think its a good idea.①There_is_no_doubt_that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages.②First_of_all，shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they dont really need.③Second，some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due_to 一、观摩领悟 lack of supervision.④Whats_worse，nowadays there_are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen.⑤Therefore，I suggest that you think twice and remain rational when you are shopping online. 【结构分析与解读】 本文的结构是总—分—总，第一句总起说明作者的观点，中间部分是分述，最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。句①运用了there is no doubt that的句型，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法，使观点更客观和鲜明；句②运用了because引导的状语从句；句③运用due to 短语连接；句④运用了there be句型和定语从句；句⑤运用了宾语从句表述。在连贯性方面，本文使用了first of all，second，whats worse等递进连词使文章的层次分明。 1．论证观点文写作应注意的问题。 (1)注意审题，避免缺漏信息点。一般而言，观点论证的文章通常都是总—分或总—分—总的结构。 (2)在论证观点的时候要注意行文严密的逻辑性，因此考生要注意使用相关的连词、副词或者短语提升文章的层次感。 (3)在语言运用方面，考生可以掌握一些常用于议论文写作的短语和句型，如compared with...，it is clear /obvious that...，from what I have mentioned above we can see that...等。 二、写作指导 2．相关短语。 come to realize开始意识到 as important as和……一样重要 push sb.to do sth. 使某人做某事 focus more on更加关注 more attention should be given to应该更加关注 both necessary and beneficial既有必要又有利 in summary总之 end up doing以做……结束 search for寻找 far outweigh...远远比……重要 become disoriented变得不知所措 due to lack of supervision由于缺乏监督 whats worse更糟糕的是 be harmful to对……有害 3．写作要点：总述—分述各要点—总结观点提出建议。 (一)翻译下列句子。 1．很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。 ________________________________________________________________________ 2．因此要更加注意英语口语教学和学习。 ________________________________________________________________________ 即学即练 Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud. Therefore，more attention s