书面表达训练三步法教材.ppt

d.The news that our football team had won came soon. → The news came soon that our football team had won. e.It began to rain just at ten o’clock. → e.It was at ten o’clock it began to rain... I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games .I was excited. → I was excited to hear that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games b ) The flat is in a building on Fangcao street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. → The flat,which is in a building on Fangcao street., is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. c ) This is the place. I worked with the farmers in the past. → This is the place where I worked with the farmers in the past. d) Mary stood in front of the window. From that place she could see her classmates playing football. → Mary stood in front of the window from where she could see her classmates playing football. The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. → Hearing the bad news，the young man couldn’t help crying. It’s a small flat. It’s 25 square meters. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen . → It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen . * 写作进阶提升之二 ——英语作文训练三步法 写作进阶提升 英语作文训练的三大步 第一步, 文从字顺的初级阶段 第二步, 多悟思变的过渡阶段 第三步, 文质兼美的高级阶段 第一步：文从字顺的初级阶段 语言错误多，汉语式的句子多 多数考生写的作文要点很全面，但是由于英语语言基础知识不扎实，语言不规范，也往往失分严重。最突出的语言错误有以下几种： （1）主谓不一致。 ① Father and I am going to visit her. ② My uncle often go to the cinema himself. （2）时态、语态混用。 ① The meal is so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. ② The old man knocked down by the car and injured badly. （3）句子成分残缺。 ① But the car which painted red didn’t stop. ② The young man running in the street fast. ③ He wouldn’t able to work out the problem. ④ We all against all forms of terrorist activities. （4）习惯搭配乱用。 ① I very like the novel. ② Then we set off digging, planting and watering. （5）汉式英语。 a) The car is yellow colour. b)He cost five yuan to bu