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Avoid “run-on sentences”Learn to “combine sentences” “I feel good!” Stand up Raise your hands Stretch your body Shake hands “I feel good!” If there is no conjunction, can sentences be connected by “commas”? How to use “Commas” “Full stops” in a composition The methods to avoid “run-on sentences”: 1) change “comma” with “full stop” 2) change “comma” with “semicolon” 3) add “conjunction” between sentences 4) change verbs into “nonfinite verbs” How to use “Commas” “Full stops” in a composition How to use “Commas” “Full stops” in a composition The methods to combine sentences: 介词短语法（preposition phrase） 并列连词法 （coordinating conjunction） 从属连词法（名定状）（subordinating conjunction） 非谓语动词法（分词、不定式、动名词）（nonfinite verb） 同位语短语法（appositive） The common puzzles from the “Pre-class Report” 1) Dogs are able and willing to learn a wide variety of tasks. They are intelligent and devoted to their owners. 2) One cheats on tests repeatedly. This is risky. This is self-defeating. 3) Tom was an even-tempered man. He was nevertheless extremely angry when he heard the news. 4) 新盖中盖高钙片，水果味，一天一片，效果不错，还实惠！ 5) 大今野大面块，六袋顶七袋，一箱等于多四袋！ “Follow-ups 1- 4” Follow up faster than the others and offer a “different, correct and good” sentence. If your answer is…, you may get…. different 1 point different and correct 2 point different, correct and good 3 point correct other groups’ mistakes 4 point “Follow-ups: 1- 4” G1 G2 G3 G4 G5 S1 S2 S3 S4 S5 score 【Note】： presented=1 points; correct=2 points; good=3 points; correct others=4 points Describe the scene in the picture 学生习作课堂即时展评 使用手机拍照，通过Wechat或QQ软件，发送至电脑，可以即时通过大屏幕来展示。 学生针对屏幕展示的习作，研讨修改。 minutes’ A naughty boy was speaking to his deskmate, a pretty girl, through a rolled book, which annoyed the girl very much. . Some while some comes from handwriting, correct, brief, fluent, logic, idiomatic