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What and How Composition --from Emma 第四节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你英国网友Helen听说湖南卫视推出《爸爸去哪儿》的节目很受欢迎，给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件。 1．介绍这个节目：邀请五位明星爸爸带着自己的孩子参加乡村困难体验，爸爸单独肩负起照顾孩子的责任，并共同完成一系列任务；爸爸和五个孩子在节目中有了巨大的改变；拉近了孩子与父亲的距离。 2．你的看法。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．开头与结尾语已为你写好。 Dear Helen， Thank you for your email. Now I would like to introduce Hunan TV popular show “Dad，Where Are We Going？” to you. ___________________________________________________________________________ What on earth went wrong? Our average score: 19.58 analyze Step one: analyze What points should be included? How many parts should there be? How to develop the article? What brilliant ideas or practical suggestions are needed? Step two: draft draft Person Tense Key words Paragraphs Step three: polish and check polish Proper transition Sentence patterns Vocabulary check punctuation spelling Vocabulary Avoid plain words in your compositions: good→ positive, favorable, promising，pleasurable , excellent, outstanding… think → take the attitude that; hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is widely acknowledged that important →vital, critical, essential, influential, meaningful, significant…… want/like to do →desire/ intend/ be eager to do / be longing to do/long to do… good, very, important, people, helpful, sometimes, want/like to do, in my opinion/I think … Please do remember: Never go to extremes! Avoid chinglish and stop translating word by word The living level of the people in China has been greatly raised. During the process, they all reached a big difference on their own. The distance between fathers and children is reduced. ____(extend, say) congratualtions to her ____( offer, hand) help do ____ (wrong, mistake) to Polish your sentences! Try different sentence patterns and , most importantly, make sure you use them in the right way! Examples are coming! It’s a good TV show. If you have time, you can try to watch it. The fathers have to burden the responsibility alone . And they are re