5經历感受.pptVIP

主题：叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长”的经历和感受 The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 一、写作技巧 经历感受通常只需包含“谁？干了什么事？结果如何？”等, 然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的看法及感受或是从这次经历中得出了什么经验教训。 写经历时, 可用借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是写记叙文, 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了, 但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致。如: 原材料是一个女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑, 但她通过努力最终取得了成功。我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不起, 但他通过努力取得了成功。 二、句式模板 引出经历： (1)The story reminds me of my experience... 这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历…… (2)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. 这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。 (3) I also had an unforgettable experience...我也曾有一次难忘的经历…… (4) Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I... 就以我的亲身经历为例吧, 三年前, 我…… (5) After reading Alan’s story, I recall the experience of my friend... 看了Alan的故事后, 我回想起我朋友的那段经历…… 感受启示： (1) From this experience I realize that it’s not easy but meaningful to be a journalist.通过这次经历, 我意识到做记者是不容易但又有意义的。 (2) Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 只有通过循序渐进地学习, 我们才能有所成就。 (3) I benefit a lot from this experience and realized that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others and brings us real happiness. 这次经历让我受益匪浅, 我意识到正是诚实才让我们赢得他人的尊重, 也给我们带来快乐。 (4) Therefore, I learned to cultivate myself to be strong-minded... 因此, 我学会了要将自己培养成意志坚强的人…… A similar example jumps into my mind. Last year, my friend Lily was admitted to a famous university in Beijing. Having been under the complete protection of her parents for many years, she felt lost when dealing with some complex situations and found it hard to go on with her study without her parents’ care. In this case, being over