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2017届第一次月考作文讲评
月考一作文讲评; 假如你叫李华，你的英国的朋友Mike与父母一道来到了中国。初来乍到，他发现自己在家时所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件。邮件的内容包含如下要点：
1. 邮件已收到，表示理解；
2. 给他提建议（至少两个）；
3．祝愿他学习取得进步。;评分的四大纬度;常见错误:;Before writing;Some useful words;Some useful words;Some useful words;Some useful words;Dear Mike,
I have received your email and I am sorry to learn that you are having difficulty with your Chinese listening and speaking. Now I would like to give you some advice on how to improve it.
Here are a few suggestions. Firstly, it’s a good idea to watch TV programs in Chinese, through which you can improve your listening. Besides, why not learn and sing Chinese songs? You’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Lastly, speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. I’m sure you will make great progress soon.
I wish you success with your studies.
Yours,
Li Hua ;建议信开头常用句式：
1. Thank you for trusting me. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice / tips.
2. I‘m sorry to hear / learn that ......
3. You have asked me for my advice on …… and I will try to make some suggestions.;表达建议常用句式：
1. If I were you, I would ……
2. As far as I am concerned, …… / In my opinion ……
3. Why not ……?
4. It would be a good idea if ……
5. In the first place / Firstly / First …… Secondly / Second …… Last but not least(最后但不是最不重要) ……;建议信结尾常用句式：
1. These are only my personal suggestions / tips. I hope you will find them useful / helpful.
2. I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / tips.;Some useful sentences;Sample
Dear Wang Qiang:
I’m sorry to learn that your parents are quarreling with each other at present. I can fully und
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