2013高中考试英语写作复习.pptVIP

2013湖南高考 英语作文;2011年高考英语作文赏析;第六部分：书面表达 Section C Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假设你参加所在年级的英语作文比赛，请按照如下要求写一篇短文： 1，简要描述下图内容，并点明主题； 2，联系实际，表达该图给你带来的启示;;这一命题一改近几年给足要点、写人写事的保守出题方式，采用了北京卷常用的看图作文。但具体的写作内容还是回归到常考话题的范畴中。题目中的漫画图并不难理解。我们可以理解为积极向上的主题：团结就是力量、部分与整体、人与社会的融合、团队协作、锲而不舍、成功需要积累、积少成多、环保节约、和谐、小错可以酿成大错等等。 写作要求与方法。全文应该包括图片描述与主题归纳、联系实际与启示三大部分内容。 第一段：简单的描述图片的内容，描述的侧重点是积少成多。并点明主题。 第二段：转化为普通的英语议论文的主体段，采取举例法，分析法，等议论方法证明观点。 第三段：总结观点，说明自己从图中学到了什么，得到了什么启示。;卷评佳作赏析; The part and the whole world Some water makes up the sea. The forest is made up of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to the whole world. Don’t forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot. It’s obvious that we look upside down some little things frequently, while look up to several honourable things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honourable thing. Normal man as you are, you can create more contributions to the society. It’s what you have done to the society that are really important .With a kind heart to the society, every part of the society is of significance. The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life will be colorful and meaningful.;; Unity is power 24 Many drops of water can make up a sea. Many trees can turn into a forest. Many people can be combined together to make a society. Everything proves the idea that unity is power. Life is full of ups and downs and there are always many difficulties lying on the road that leads to success. When we come across some difficulties , what should we do to solve the problems? Of course unity can help us a lot. ; For example, on 5th December,2008,a terrible earthquake happened in Sichuan province. Many people were injured and lots of people died but t