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如何写好高考英语作文得高分？ 近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。 句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(21～25分)。 1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词,adj等做状语等 ［原文1］We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. ［修正］Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. ［原文2］The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. ［修正］Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying. ③由with或without引导的短语。如: He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④分词短语。如: Satisfied with the result， he decided to go on with a new experiment. ⑤倒装句。如: Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.  3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 ［原文1］He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. ［修正］He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. ［原文2］We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.Some told stories. Some played chess. ［修正］After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess. 5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如: ［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown. ［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如: ［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.  基础写作 高三二轮英语综合测试（一） 如今，外出旅游的人越来越多。有些物品可能是外出旅游时必备的。现在，请说明你外出旅游时选择以下物品的理由 【写作内容】 1、身份证：旅游者必备的最基本的证件； 2、相机：记录所看到的东西，带来乐趣； 3、手机：联系家人、朋友： 4、MP3 player： 用于旅游途中打发时间。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 I always take my ID card, camera, mobile phone, MP3 player and some other things with me while travelling. I think an ID card is a basic and necessary document for tourists. A camera is used to record what I see, and it can bring me a lot of fun. A mobile phone is very useful to keep in touch with my family and