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托付写作3钟基础句型 1.简单句：主语+谓语+宾语 People hold different views on this issue. 2.并列句：主语+谓语+宾语+and/but/so/or主语+谓语+宾语 Poor students` behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I believe that modern lifestyles are responsible for this. 3.复杂句：用更复杂的连词连接句子 有些人把幸福和财富连接起来，但是也有一些人认为幸福取决于情绪和良好的人际关系。 Some individuals link happiness to wealth, while others claim that it lies in emotions and loving interpersonal relationship. 托福写作10种高分句型总结 1.名词性从句：可以但减少使用定语从句，多用名词性从句-----主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句 （1）我们所关注的是填鸭式教育在多大程度上损害了学生的创造力。 What we are concerned about is that to what extent spoon-feed schooling is harmful to students` creativity. 主语从句，表语从句 （2）我个人的观点是学生在上大学之前，应该被鼓励去旅游或者工作一年，因为这是最好的方式来让他们清楚的认识到他们在未来应该做的事并为之付出努力。 My personal view is that students are encouraged to travel or work for a year before starting university, because it is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they should do in the foreseeable future and pull every string to do it. get a clear perspective of…..对….有清晰的认识 in the foreseeable future在不远的未来 pull every string to do= do one`s upmost to do =try one`s best to do 尽力做某事 2.状语提前 把由副词，介词，现在分词，过去分词，或者不定式构成的小短语提到首句，增强句式多样性。 （1）.政府应该鼓励人们乘坐地铁来缓解交通堵塞。 To alleviate traffic jam, the government should encourage people to take the subway. (2).优秀老师从态度方面来看更加积极有耐心。 In terms of attitude, good teachers tend to be more motivated and patient. (3).这些人因为贫穷甚至不能负担基本的生活需要。 Living in poverty, these individuals do not even afford the basic domestic needs. (4).除了金融危机的影响，大学生的学术水平较低也是高失业率的一个主要原因。 In addition to the impact of financial crisis, the graduates` low acadmic level also accounts for the high unemployment rate. Account for:1.说明，解释……的原因 A account for B 2占……比例 3.句中插入短语 1).最重要的是，态度对一个人的身心发展都是必不可少的。 Above all, attitude is essential for one’s both physical and psychological development. Attitude, above all, is essential for one’s both physical and psychological development. 要领：主谓语不要连用，把主语和谓语用插入语隔开。常用作插入语的成分：不定式，分词，介词短语，同位语，连词，句子 (2).作为日常生活必需的一部分，购物越来越耗费时间。 Shopping