高中英语写作范本2.pptVIP

* 请根据上面两幅图写一篇短文，写作时要注意以下几点： 把漫画中的内容描述清楚；你自己对此幅漫画的感受观 点；可适当地发挥，使语言连贯。 词数：120左右 参考词汇：扶起油瓶straighten the oil bottle up 审题构思 Part I 1.女孩跌倒 2.儿子要扶她 3.妈妈阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。” 1. A little girl fell over. 2. The son wanted to help the girl up. 3. His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” 表达法： 1. A boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground. A boy wanted to give a hand to a girl who fell over on the ground. 2.His mother prevented him from helping the girl. His mother persuaded him not to do so. 3. She said to his son, “Don’t do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her down.” 4. The boy was about to give a hand to a girl who fell over on the ground when his mother stopped him, saying, “…” 1. 妈妈看到倒在地上的瓶子。 2.儿子说： “我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的。” 审题构思 Part 2 1. The mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground. 2.The son said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.” 表达法： 1. The mother saw that her son ignored the fallen oil bottle on the ground. The boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground beside his feet. 2. The boy said to his mother, “If I had straightened the oil bottle up, you would have thought that it was I who brought it down.” 3. Hearing her son’s explanation, the mother was shocked/astonished/surprised. 4. The mother was shocked at seeing/hearing … 审题构思 Part 3 我的感想 1.我对母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法：不同意 2.我想： ① 家庭教育很重要 ② 父母应该为孩子树立好榜样 ③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社会这个大家庭中。 1. I disagree with what the mother did in the story. 2. ① Parenting is of vital importance. ② I think parents should set a good example to their children . ③They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help those who are in trouble. Because the society we live in is a big family for all