满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdfVIP

智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗 下智课教育 下面，小编要为大家推荐的是，考生可以通过研究 GRE写作 范文来提高自己的写作水平。 【题目】 The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg: Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Eggs landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted. 【满分范文赏析】 【第1段】 In this memo West Eggs mayor indicates that a variety of factors lead to an increase in recycling and a reduction in the amount of trash deposited in the landfill. The landfill, he states, should not be full for considerably longer than previously projected. To support this projection the mayor cites the following evidence: (1) a twofold increase in aluminum and paper recycling by West Egg residents over the last two years, (2) an impending twofold increase in charges for trash pickup, and (3) a recent survey in which 90% of respondents indicated that they intend to do more recycling in the future. For several reasons, however, I am not convinced that the mayors projection is accurate. 【本段结构】 本文采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即C—A—F的开头结构 。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所 引用的一系列Assumption及细节，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句 ，指出原文的Flaw，即这些Assumption无法让原文的结论具有说服力 。 【本段功能】 作为Argument开头段，本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文 的结论，即West Egg垃圾池的装满要比之前顾问预期的晚。本段接下 来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusion所提供的证据，包括West Eg g居民对于某些特定垃圾的回收量上升了，对于居民征收的垃圾处理费 用加倍 ，