07-12四级真题分析.ppt

1. Writing 1. Classification 1) 提纲式 2）段首式 3）图表示 4）关键词 5）情景式 6）应用文 2. Writing Skills（高分策略 6Cs） 1）字迹清楚，段落明朗（clear） 2）内容完整，紧扣提纲（complete） 3）先总后分，连词用上（coherent） 4) 语言简练，论据得当（concise） 5）首保正确，再求闪光（correct） 6）仔细检查， 减少失误 （careful） 比如连接词有： First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However ，on the other hand, furthermore, whereas 等。 写作常用过渡词语 （1）表时间关系：thereupon, thereafter, eventually, at last etc. （2）表空间关系：below, beneath, above, on the top of, next to etc. （3）表比较关系：just as…so, in the same way, likewise, similarly etc. （4）表对比关系：on the contrary, different from, on the other hand, whereas etc. （5）表分析关系：first, second, for this purpose, furthermore, moreover, in summary etc. 1、是否长短句交叉; 2、是否会使用插入语; 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使 用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 　　1.适当用被动替换主动。 2.善于使用插入语。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等.)比如: applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 等 * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * back They shared over 25 years together before our father passed away. At the time of his death, the question came up of my mother, daddy’s first wife, attending his funeral. I will never forget the unconditional love shown by my stepmother, when I asked her if she would object to mother attending daddy’s funeral. Without giving it a second thought, she immediately replied, “Of course not, honey, she is the mother of my children.” (31) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage Two-3 随笔 back In February last year,