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* 第一步 构建框架,清晰行文 [谋篇布局] [黄金模板] From the picture/In the picture/Looking at the picture, we can see its about a person who ________(人物). Its ________(时间或地点). He/She is/They are doing ________(事件). Something occurs to me. ________(漫画中人物) should ________ and shouldnt ________(个人观点). As we all know, at present/in the society most people ________(联系生活实际). Besides/Worse still, some people ________(继续议论). In my opinion, the government/the school/we should take measures to/something must be done to ________(采取措施).Only in this way can the problem be really solved./Only when everybody can do so will our world become more and more beautiful. 第二步 打造亮句,增色文章 1.这幅图引起我们的深刻思考:我们的社会是由许多拥有不同个性和性格的人组成的。 ?We cant help thinking deeply when seeing the picture: our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters. ?The picture sets us thinking deeply: our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters. 2.既然我们每个人都与其他人相联系,我们就应该为我们所说所做的事情负责任。 ?Now that everyone is related to others, we should take responsibility for what we say and what we do. ?Since everybody is related to others, we should be responsible for what we say and what we do. 第三步 串句成文,保证流畅 The picture shows us a simple truth: If too many drops of water are put together, they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society. It conveys a message to us: A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related. Nothing or no one could exist alone. The picture sets us thinking deeply: our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters. If we want to create a harmonious society, we must live in harmony with others. On the other hand, since everybody is related to others, we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others, which makes it possible for us to enjoy our li
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