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My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day. 2.The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. A.强调句 B.主从复合句 C.分词短语，由with或without引导的短语 D.倒装句 E.省略句 F.通过分句和合句 ，增强句子的连贯性和表现力 试改变下列句子,使之变化多样,生动有力 * * * 安丘一中 曹化宗 安丘一中 曹化宗 1、 改变句子的开头方式 句子不要一味都用主语开头，接着是 谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。 可以把状语置于句首， 或用分词作状语等。 试比较： chz The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. chz Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. chz 2、在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两 个句式。 在一篇文章中,要灵活运用诸如 强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、 倒装句、省略句等。 chz It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. The dog has saved my Little sister bravely. chz What we had to do was to stand there，trying to catch the offender. We had to stand there to catch the offender. chz The driver escaped without stopping，leaving the old man lying on the road. The driver escaped and didn’t stop.He left the old man lying on the road. chz Not until 11：30 did I go to bed . I went to bed at 11：30. chz While crossing the street， you should be careful. While you are crossing the street，you should be careful. （省略结构) chz He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. 1.He stop us an hour ago .He made us catch the next offfender. chz After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing. We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. chz Early in themorning, we met ……. We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning (句序） . chz Weak as I am , I will make the effort . Although I am weak, I will make the effort. (用as结构） chz Singing and laughing, They went back to school. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.（分词） chz He left without saying goodbye. Ｈe left and didn’t say good-bye. (with或without结构） chz Open …, and you…. 病句:Open the door, you can see a bed on your left. If you ope