书面表达上课用.ppt

 修改意见: The English-Chinese Chinese- English Dictionary, which costs 52 RMB, has many examples. 1.合理利用介词或名词代替动词,能有 效降低句子的复杂性,在令句子通顺自 然的同时,也能减少语法错误。 试体会下面划线部分被括号内词语替代 后的效果。 (1)The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. (with) (2)I was pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school. (about) (3)I have a surprise to give you. (for) 2.使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句。 常见的结构有介词短语、名词短语、非 谓语动词、独立主格结构、同位语等结 构。 The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and said,He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender. 修改意见:Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender. (2) My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him. 修改意见:My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind. 3.通过合句,将意义相关的几个句子, 用一定的连接方式连接起来,或通过 紧缩,去掉一些多余的成分可以避免 冗长累赘,松散无力,使句子凝炼,层次 清晰。 I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. 修改意见:I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. (2)The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary have many examples. The price of ECCED is 52 RMB. (3)I heard you are learning Chinese. I very glad to hear that. 修改意见: I’m very glad to hear that you’re learning Chinese. * * 书面表达分析 一、试题特点 试题要求：假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信。 中国最常用的汉语字典 特点 11元 52元 价格 10,000 18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语) 收词(字) 新华字典 英汉/汉英词典 命题特点： 要求明确，审题容易，不易离题； 实用性强，情景真实；贴近生活 学生有话可说，表达难度不大。 评分标准 1.准确使用语法和词汇 2.使用一定的句型,词汇,清楚,连贯的表达自己的意思. 3.要点全面,表达准确,语句连贯; 4.能用书写体熟练清楚的书写,格式,连笔,词距, 标点正确. 5.书写格式,行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误. 6.基本语法和常用句型无严重错误,意思表达清楚. 7.鼓励使用复杂结构包括定语从句,强调句,倒装, 被动,虚拟,非谓语短语,SO….that , 和with加复合宾语等. （五） 24分 Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about