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思路+破题 左彦龙 Mz 写作思路篇 托福写作题目是关于 “一个事件对个人的影响” 或 “个人对一个事件的影响”。 一个中心 三个基本点 个人 社会 家庭 学校 人 “当事人” “相关人” 个人 能力：ability\capability\capacity\ skill 社会交际能力 strengthen the interpersonal skill, and thus ramp up the social networking 独立思考/生活能力 independent thinking/living skill 创新能力 innovative and creative skill 个人 能力： enhance the resilience抗压能力 cooperative skill 合作能力 增强 sharpen enhance strengthen polish upgrade better hone 阻碍 impede hamper restrain stifle the creativity(imagination) dampen the interest 个人 健康 physical and psychological soundness augment the risk of diseases and ailments such as obesity, hypertension, diabetes, tumor, myopia, asthma. 个人 健康 allay and alleviate people’s pressure buffer the negative effects of chronic stress 个人 就业 land a well-paid\ decent job engage in a rosy career. boost and benefit in working efficiency 对人分类 职业（学生，医生，科学家，教师…) 年龄（小孩，成人，老年人） 性别（男，女） 对学校分类 小学、中学、大学 职业中学、综合大学 对“社会”细化 交通 文化 rejuvenate and revitalize our culture 环境 protect and preserve the environment 教育 健康 科技 经济propel and impel the development of the economy 例题： Some scientists believe that studying of behavior of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think that a crime is a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children grow up to be criminals? “一个中心三个基本点” 的分析 个人： 基因及先天影响 个人：不成熟，自制力差，容易受到不良影响 父母：工作忙，对孩子关心少，监督不够；或有家庭暴力；或父母离异 学校：只注重学习成绩，忽略了心理健康、法律意识的培养；坏学生的影响 社会：社会中媒体的影响；电脑游戏的影响 例题 Food can be produced cheaper if we use improved fertilizers and better machinery. However some methods may be dangerous for human health, and have negative effects for local communities. What is your opinion？ 参与者： producers( farmers) consumers Chemical fertilizers and pesticides Detrime