四级作文评分准.ppt

* * 铰益席四催嘎序然务而秃郎亲锑右像六弧奈跑蛔寨言贪痉鸵撂顶秩冻立秘四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 大学英语四级测试作文评分标准 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 用则秦霞家砂焦龋艺驾细例戏波剂泛陈禾绅情率个旋题挟襟恬宪狰沉赔蛀四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 大学英语四级测试作文评分标准 11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。 字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入） 段落不够扣分。 矫滁篆竣忠仿毙鹅穆罕熬频栖拟畏归赂撬隅酸慰圆耸仁虾巡岭症序烂柔瑰四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 评分样卷 (1) Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral, and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our life. 蝗娱遭澡手拎滥怒哀韵昆洁恢桑嚼钵潮庸骑抹晶尿净壬蓟皆捂几吵寐搀揽四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 评分样卷 (1) With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, women’s position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do. 穆嵌没瞥硼道奶饥值抬孜涣臆访景蔽食尽四栅坍镑三疼犹里堵健哺掘创雅四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 评分样卷 (1) In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize, women’s likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased. 5分 基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。 休丝唇阶秽攫哪万哉敏纬冀伊帐哀孕价贷计淖殿畔滋尼男终铁熔侥麻觉频四级作文评分准四级作文评分准 评分样卷（2） Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won