英语写作优化句子的常用方法3.ppt

一、运用同位语 此方法多用于介绍人物、事物、产品、书名或地点等。 【例1】介绍事物： 射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪才发展成为一项体育运动。 Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 一、运用同位语 【例2】介绍人物： 上周我们就中小学生近视问题采访了眼科医生王教授。 Last week, we had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. 【例3】介绍书名： 书名： Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 作者： Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授 中文版： 2011年初开始在中国销售 A book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, written by Amy Chua, an American-Chinese, has been sold in China since the beginning of 2011. 运用同位语合并句子 1. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province. Guangzhou, the capital and the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province, is located in the middle of Guangdong. 运用同位语合并句子 2. Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year. Zhang Hai, male, 23 years old, graduated from Hunan Normal University last year. 运用同位语完成句子 1. 去年，我被邀请参加一个为“待援助的孩子”（Tuesday Child）举办的一个狂欢节（carnival），“待援助的孩子”是一个帮助艾滋患儿的组织。 Last year, I was invited to participate in a carnival for Tuesday Child, ______________________________. 运用同位语完成句子 2. 离2012年还有一个月时间，但《孤星指南》（the Lonely Planet）等不及宣布来年十大旅游城市排行榜，《孤星指南》是世界最畅销旅游指南杂志之一。 There is still more than one month to go before 2012. But the Lonely Planet, _________________________ ___________ , can’t wait to announce its top 10 cities to travel to in the coming year. 运用同位语翻译合并句子 1. 嘉玲是个女孩子，今年18岁，她在育才中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。 Jialing, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Yucai Middle School. 运用同位语翻译合并句子 2. 姓名：Steve Jobs 别名：苹果教父（godfather） 出生地：美国加州三藩市 出生日期：1955年2月24日 逝世日期：2011年10月5日 Steve Jobs, the godfather of Apple, was born in San Francisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011. 二、运用短语 介词短语 非谓语动词短语：现在分词 过去分词