初中英语 作文课 基于学生评价的英语写作教学.ppt

Golden rule 5 5 Nice and neat handwriting 5 Rules CONTENTS Good ideas 1 Clear organization 2 No grammar mistakes 3 Wonderful sentences 4 Nice and neat handwriting 5 Work together to make it better! Many hands make light work! 众人拾柴火焰高！ Practice makes perfect! 央视节目《朗读者》（The Reader）自播出以来，广受好评，更是掀起了读书的热潮。高尔基曾经说过：“书籍是人类进的阶梯”。你们学校也开设了读书俱乐部，鼓励同学们多读请你完成以下通知。开头结尾已给出。 要求:1. 请写一段话阐述阅读的重要性，比如阅读使人聪慧， 可以令人放松等； 2. 要求结构清晰，字迹工整，语言流畅； 3. 字数在50字左右。 Review and write down what you learnt in this lesson. Homework Review writing rules that you learnt in this lesson. Edit your writing with the five golden rules. Thank your for listening! 基于学生评价的英语写作教学 Golden Rules for Writing Character Ending Ending Ending Character Reflection Comment 1 2 4 3 Thank you for sharing your ideas! Ben Cassie Lucy Teemo Echo James Bruce Carsyn Anna Ice Jeff Linda Ivy Sukey Tom Bob Kiki David Connie Cissy Summer Crystal Loretta Lisa 1 2 3 4 Character Character Ending Ending Ending Reflection Comment Comments Excellent Fair Needs improvement 1 2 3 4 3 4 2 1 Summary! Golden rules for writing Golden rule 1 1 What makes others want to read your articles? Make your ideas worth spreading! Good ideas 1 The more you read, the broader your world will be. Golden rule 2 2 How can you make your ideas clear? Clear organization 2 How can you make your ideas clear? Clear organization 2 Introduction Body Conclusion My Favourite Character A: Have you ever seen a cat that can smile and slowly disappear? I saw him in a lazy afternoon, with a little bit of sunlight on my small book which is about a girl named Alice. Cheshire Cat is my favourite character from Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland. （from: Echo） B: I read the book Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland last week. There are many interesting characters in the book, such as the Queen, the March Hare, the Mock Turtle, the Mad Hatter, Cheshire Cat, the White Rabbit, and so on. (From: William) main idea be attractive Good introduction sum