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看图作文;看图作文写作技巧;2011年北京高考;;假设你是你是李华，本周你们正在学习Life in the Future单元。白天，你们进行了讨论；夜晚，你梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观。请根据下面五幅图，写一篇日记。;时态和人称;本周正在学习Life in the Future 白天进行了讨论;本周正在学习Life in the Future 白天进行了讨论;晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观;晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观;当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕;当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕;我吓得一下子惊醒，原来是起床的时候了;一，简单句与复合句并用，长短句结合;;;After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012. My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft. I was shocked.;Just at that time, I woke up. The alarm was still ringing. It was the alarm clock that woke me up. It was time to get up.;Sept 21, 2012 Friday Fine This week, we have been learning Life in the Future. In this unit, we have not only learned a lot about our future, but we discussed about this topic as well. At night, I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by time craft. I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft. Shocked, I woke up suddenly. However, the alarm in the time craft was still ringing! Looking around, I realized it was the alarm clock which reminded me of the time to get up. What a relief! It was only a dream! ;总结： 1. 审题一定要仔细 2. 要按要求写作 (guided writing, directions) 3. 文章中描写部分要注意“人称，时态”的统一 4. 长短句结合，合理使用高级句式 5. 不要盲目套用信件等应用文的模式 6. 功夫下在平时。夯实基础，注重积累好词好句